Chapter 8 - Independence
Marcus Price had always hated the word failure.
He could remember exactly when.
He was eleven years old when his father left.
Not dramatically.
No shouting.
No suitcase thrown into a car.
Leon Price simply stopped returning after work.
Three days later, Lillian Price received a call from Atlanta.
Leon had decided he “needed space.”
Marcus never saw him again.
Lillian worked two jobs.
She never let Marcus call them poor.
“We are temporarily stretched,” she would say.
At eighteen, when Marcus got his first warehouse job twelve miles away, Lillian bought him a ten-year-old Oldsmobile.
She handed him the keys in their apartment parking lot and said, “A man can’t build anything if he can’t get where he’s going.”
Marcus had cried.
He hated remembering that now.
Because Jordan’s face in the driveway had looked exactly like Marcus had once imagined he would look if Lillian had handed those keys to someone else.
Marcus stood in his home office staring at the framed photograph on his desk.
Jordan at age eight.
Missing front tooth.
Little League uniform.
Marcus picked it up.
Then set it face down.
His phone rang.
His mother.
Of course.
He answered.
“Hi, Ma.”
“What did you do?”
Marcus closed his eyes.
“Tiana called me.”
His younger sister had always been incapable of leaving family conflicts alone.
“It’s handled.”
“Did you buy Keisha’s boy a car?”
“Darius.”
“I know his name.”
“Yes.”
“And Jordan asked you for help?”
“It’s complicated.”
“No, it isn’t.”
Marcus rubbed his forehead.
“Ma, I’m forty-five.”
“And still my son. Answer.”
“Yes.”
Lillian went quiet.
Marcus hated that more than yelling.
Finally she said, “Do you remember the Oldsmobile?”
He looked at the wall.
“Yes.”
“I had eight hundred dollars in savings when I bought that thing.”
“I know.”
“No, you don’t. Because I never told you.”
Marcus frowned.
“What?”
“I paid twenty-six hundred dollars for it. I borrowed eighteen hundred from your Aunt Cheryl.”
“Why would you do that?”
“So you could get to work.”
Marcus sat.
“You should have made me buy it myself.”
Lillian laughed once.
“Why?”
“To teach me.”
“Teach you what? Bus routes?”
Marcus’s jaw tightened.
“Jordan needs resilience.”
“Jordan works.”
“I know.”
“He saved money.”
“I know.”
“He graduated.”
“I know.”
“So what exactly are you teaching?”
Marcus had no answer that didn’t sound thin.
Lillian continued.
“Tiana says you told that boy you had no money.”
“I didn’t want him depending on me.”
“You mean you wanted him depending on you less.”
“Yes.”
“Then say that.”
Marcus frowned.
“What?”
“Don’t call rejection a lesson because it sounds nicer.”
His mother’s words landed too close to Jordan’s.
Marcus stood.
“Everybody has decided I’m some kind of villain.”
“Nobody called you that.”
“You’re acting like it.”
“No. I’m acting like your mother. Which means I remember who helped you.”
Marcus looked at the upside-down photograph.
“I didn’t have a father helping me.”
“That’s exactly why this is worse.”
His throat tightened.
“Ma.”
“You know what being left feels like.”
“I never left Jordan.”
“Not physically.”
Marcus’s breathing stopped.
Lillian’s voice softened.
“Sometimes a child can watch you choose somebody else and feel abandoned from six feet away.”
Marcus ended the call soon after.
He told himself he was angry at the accusation.
But when he sat again, he remained motionless for several minutes.
Then the office doorbell camera chimed.
Someone stood outside.
Darius.
Marcus went downstairs.
The teenager stood on the porch holding the car keys.
“You could’ve given those to your mother.”
“I wanted to talk to you.”
Marcus opened the door.
Darius did not enter.
“Okay.”
Darius held out the keys.
“I’m not taking the car.”
“We covered this.”
“No. You covered it.”
Marcus’s irritation rose.
“Darius, Jordan’s issue with me has nothing to do with you.”
“I know.”
“Then stop letting him make you feel guilty.”
“He didn’t.”
Marcus paused.
“What?”
“Jordan told me not to feel guilty.”
That stung for reasons Marcus did not understand.
Darius continued.
“He said I didn’t choose what you did.”
Marcus crossed his arms.
“Then why are you here?”
“Because I don’t want something that hurt somebody else.”
“It was a gift.”
“Not if the money was his.”
Marcus froze.
Darius saw.
“My mom told me.”
“She shouldn’t have.”
“Is it true?”
Marcus looked toward the street.
Darius stepped closer.
“Was it Jordan’s money?”
“I borrowed from an account.”
“For Jordan?”
Marcus did not answer.
Darius shook his head.
“I can’t drive that.”
“I replaced it.”
“You replaced the money?”
“Yes.”
“Did you replace what happened?”
Marcus stared.
Darius looked embarrassed, almost apologetic.
“I’m not trying to disrespect you.”
“You’re doing a decent job.”
Darius lowered his eyes.
Marcus immediately regretted it.
“Look—”
“No. It’s okay.”
Darius put the keys on the porch table.
“Thanks for wanting to help me.”
Marcus said nothing.
“But I think you wanted me to think you were somebody you weren’t.”
The boy turned.
Marcus felt humiliation flare.
“Your mother put that in your head.”
Darius stopped.
“No.”
He looked back.
“Jordan did.”
Marcus’s eyes narrowed.
Darius corrected himself.
“Not because he said anything bad.”
A pause.
“Because he didn’t.”
Then he left.
Marcus remained on the porch.
The keys lay beside him.
Useless.
Just as they had in Darius’s hand after Jordan walked away.
Marcus picked them up.
For a moment, he considered throwing them into the yard.
Instead he closed his fist around them.
His phone buzzed.
A notification from the bank.
LPM Holdings mortgage payment returned.
Insufficient available funds.
Marcus stared at the screen.
Then another email arrived.
FINAL NOTICE BEFORE FORECLOSURE REFERRAL.
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And the six thousand dollars he had just put back into Jordan’s account had been the money Marcus intended to use to stop it.
